like dental floss
stuck in your teeth,
truth-the inextricable bother.
I speak of things i feel, so primordial, that structured expression kills the essence. I speak of things i see. so easy to ignore, yet, so crucial I find release in the seeming disorder of my Poetry; the subtle signs i see.
9 smoke wisps:
True that!
Profound. Ah, how I envy and admire your brevity!
Perfect quote for a cubicle pin-up. may i?
This is the second haiku I read today.
ciao
Profound indeed
learning something new today, thanks!
awesome. how are u so talented? whew.
heyyy..i've been hooked to haiku. and this one's just the one! :)
loved it. I know am really late to your page, have been meaning to drop by since long, but anyways so much for excuses!! The haiku is lovely, truly a lingering bother truth is!!
mikim: how about one of your awesome pen and ink doodles in return?
spy girl: you tell me!
your blog=side-splitting laughter
each time
tris: now you, would really know ;)
iggy, quicksilver, sujata : thank you girls :)
mayur: glad to be of help ;)
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You whisper your name... but i can't hear it.