Monday, November 16, 2009

tonight i know i cannot sleep; words, just words, offer no release.



I,
live life break mind close eyes laugh lies
sew hope lay claim heal self stay out
I,
dance true play nice love scorn rule high
care less want all buy time sow doubt
I,
dye dream slip not feel right know more
take turn write mess blot own choke shout
I,
leave sense force thought fail faith find shore
add note make chance tie down lose count






17 smoke wisps:

Atrisa said...

Woman! If I were a boy I would ask you to marry me :P

You write your mind and somehow I feel a burden off mine.

As the Mind Meanders said...

No subtle signs here... its glaring and obvious... you are brilliant... and I am getting fed up of telling you that...

Can you please write something shoddy for a change :(

As the Mind Meanders said...

And Meg... look what you have gone and done.. now AT wants to marry you????

:D :D

Meghana Naidu said...

tris: but hon, they're words, just words.
remember that!
*dont you forget*
<3

meandering mind: you're just way too nice, and the next crappy thing i write will find its way into your inbox (i dare not post it here!)
;)

but thank you,you guys,
one wants to marry me and the other thinks im brillant. thats enough to make anyone's day!
<3 <3

Iggy said...

'I,
dye dream slip not feel right know more
take turn write mess blot own choke shout'

<3

Diwakar Sinha said...

wah! what a composition!

Atrisa said...
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Atrisa said...

Sweetie, it's not the words, it's the mind :)

And oh yeah,

I,
leave sense force thought fail faith find shore
add note make chance tie down lose count

<3

mikimbizi said...

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so
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yet

be
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PULKIT said...

left speechless by the boundless frame of words...brilliant!

Meghana Naidu said...

iggy: thankee pardner! :) [couldnt resist ;) ]

diwakar: thank you :)

tris: the mind the mind. it thinks crazy thoughts and then jumps into a wine pool
thats what the mind does.
ok let me stop before i drive myself(and you) crazy
;)
<3 <3 to you!

hippie-girl: hehehe! thank you, you crazy girl :D you are wonderfully disconnected too ;)
<3

pulkit: thank you :)



all: "always, always nice to hear things like this.
a girl couldnt ask for more on a blue blue rainy monday"
<3

Quicksilver said...

an abstract, complex, extended, beautiful haiku!! love it

Meghana Naidu said...

quicksilver: love all the words you use :) thank you!

nanda said...

amazing pairing and play. my favorite part was "sew hope".

Meghana Naidu said...

nandy: thank you )
I think that was my favorite part too...

PULKIT said...

beautifully penned down!!

Manish Bhatt said...

Magical! Silky! Wonders!

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