Sunday, September 27, 2009

blue dusk


though i know 

you'd want to,
steal the colour of the skies;

i would still,
frankly so,
gladly keep my Indigo.


12 smoke wisps:

Atrisa said...

It would make more sense to me if it was a return ticket by Indigo air. Hehe, just kidding :) Will think about this under the Goan skies!

Diwakar Sinha said...

Lets then together make the rainbow :)

krow said...

hmmm
i would keep my azure.

unsungpsalm said...

I absolutely adore your shorter pieces... They're so clever, if not profound.

mentalie said...

pretty, meghana, very pretty :)

Quicksilver said...

really really beautiful :)

agent green glass said...

how do you do it. every single time.

As the Mind Meanders said...

Ok

Meghana Naidu said...

@tris
please dont! Goa deserves doing better things ;)

@diwakar
no, no rainbow, its flimsy and garish
i like just the indigo, dark and powerful, thank you very much

@krow
azure is light, it floats

@unsung
well thank you :) but you know how my poetry works ;)

@meandering mind
not ok!
perseverance is the key

Meghana Naidu said...

@mentalie
thank you, its very pretty in my mind too, complete monochrome
;)

@quicksilver
:) indigo IS a beautiful colour, but terribly underrated like the crow

@atom spy
well, i, mmm, thank you :)

unsungpsalm said...

@Meghna
In subtle, yet beautiful ways... Tingles the mind and the wit, at the same time.

Meghana Naidu said...

@unsung
sweet boi you :)

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