He is
an open book;
but the pages,
are blank.
and I;
I always thought,
that I,
could read them all.
Saturday, June 27, 2009
In my head
He is
an open book;
but the pages,
are blank.
and I;
I always thought,
that I,
could read them all.
He is
an open book;
but the pages,
are blank.
and I;
I always thought,
that I,
could read them all.
all the love
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Ye voyeurs
- Meghana Naidu
- Bangalore, India
- Nothing compares to the allure and power of the written word. An architect, a writer,a poet, I enjoy the occasional photography Love animals and would hate to live in a world devoid of them Music gives expression to the lost thoughts deep within me.... \m/
16 smoke wisps:
In that case, you could have tried to fill those pages with your beautiful words, and I am sure you did :)
oh.
i did, but that's all they were 'my words'
the pages are still blank.
"I always thought,
that I,
could read them all."
Wow! Extremely profound!
@unsung: Thank you.
and your pseudonym is so intriguing!
Hmm. I have some difficulty understanding what you're saying.
I was expecting:
He is
an open book,
and the pages
are full
of words
that I cannot read
but I,
I always thought,
that I,
could read them all.
I can't write poetry or comprehend it, for the life of me.
I love this. (as usual?) I love this.
Not sure why.
for an open book there are far too less words. How many marks did you get for this assignment? :D
@orange: if there "were" words, one can at least try,
but if the pages are blank,
what then?
what can you do?
its like trying to find meaning in a empty painting.
@M
girl i almost dont want you to love it, because to love it you need to understand what it feels like :|
*sigh
this June is turning out to be morose, innit?
@DP: i flunked out. :| disgusting, i know.
but i'm thinking of giving him a typewriter for his birthday, so maybe there's still hope for me !!! :D
Meghana. Brilliant.
@meandering mind: Thank you. always nice to hear that. :)
An empty open book, you have,
which you can still try to reach.
Worse yet, is a filled tome,
that you know you can never read.
Excellent piece of work though :)
I thought I'd left a comment here...
Anyhow, I'll repeat myself
This is a masterpiece. I'm not half qualified to say it, but I'll say it all the same- This is extreme maturity.
The indirect expression (left unuttered) that lies beneath the layer of the more obvious (though equally significant) expression is what makes these lines so priceless.
Much love,
Chinmayee.
@kavya
true ;) i love it when my thoughts trigger a chain reaction!
thank you :)
@chinmayee
im surprised at how accurately you caught the essence of it all,
minimalism is never my thing, im as eloquent as they come
but here, nothing more is necessary i felt.
*Thank you*
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