Thoughts flutter.
moth wings soft and shimmery,
slow dance. from inside the dark,
into the night light.
They morph, hide.
They escape, only to be found again.
They pause, stay.
they dance and come out to play.
And while they stay,
sleep eludes.
night grows long,
heavy eyes droop,
reason sleeps.
And then,
caught in this sweet maze,
shy dreams smile.
niiiice !
ReplyDeletethanks nandy :) you havent written in a while now..?
ReplyDeletei have, but wasn't happy with it myself, so didn't post the link on fb,
ReplyDeletethis month's quota has yet to begin!
you should..and post it on fb too! :D
ReplyDeletecan totally see how high u r already... :) keep rockin....
ReplyDeleteOhhh I LOVED it. Just *perfect* for what s been going on with me over the last two days. Perfect. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteAs it began, it reminded me of The Rasmus. :D Their lyrics are kinda similar, if you ask me. :P
You, gmail id. I'd like to get to know you better. :D
@merin: thank you =) The rasmus you say... i will get on to the task of suing them immediately ;) haven't heard the rasmus actually.. my music tastes are well.. erm.. obscure :D
ReplyDeletewhats been going on with you? :O you know I love to hear about that. so please, write.
Im going to go ahead and add a small note for someone. Thank you for the inspiration. you know who you are.
ReplyDeletePerceptive.
ReplyDeleteCan I make a song out of it? :)
Try Rasmus! They are... weird-ish. :P
ReplyDeleteOur type. :P
In one word , 'insightful'!
ReplyDelete@pankaj: happy high!! :D
ReplyDelete@boogers: sure you can! the perfect jugalbandhi dont you think? ;)
@merin: he he he our type :P will give em a listen..
@kavya: thank you :)
thts a beautiful poem!
ReplyDeletequite an animated feel to it :)
-another chance visitor (via on "Mon Monde")
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-Shamanth
I could paint your poem if I was a painter.... its worth a sketch i feel
ReplyDelete@shamanth thank you :) you've got some brilliant things goign on in your blog! loved it.
ReplyDelete@nindo you managed to read it! thank you :)
nice work... this would make a wonderful song to play in front of fire with a guitar albeit in white stripes style...
ReplyDeleteThank you Z. id love it if it WAS turned into a song, id pefer it if it was Slash and Morrison though...
ReplyDeletedont you think? ;)