I,
live life break mind close eyes laugh lies
sew hope lay claim heal self stay out
I,
I,
dance true play nice love scorn rule high
care less want all buy time sow doubt
I,
I,
dye dream slip not feel right know more
take turn write mess blot own choke shout
I,
I,
leave sense force thought fail faith find shore
add note make chance tie down lose count
Woman! If I were a boy I would ask you to marry me :P
ReplyDeleteYou write your mind and somehow I feel a burden off mine.
No subtle signs here... its glaring and obvious... you are brilliant... and I am getting fed up of telling you that...
ReplyDeleteCan you please write something shoddy for a change :(
And Meg... look what you have gone and done.. now AT wants to marry you????
ReplyDelete:D :D
tris: but hon, they're words, just words.
ReplyDeleteremember that!
*dont you forget*
<3
meandering mind: you're just way too nice, and the next crappy thing i write will find its way into your inbox (i dare not post it here!)
;)
but thank you,you guys,
one wants to marry me and the other thinks im brillant. thats enough to make anyone's day!
<3 <3
'I,
ReplyDeletedye dream slip not feel right know more
take turn write mess blot own choke shout'
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wah! what a composition!
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ReplyDeleteSweetie, it's not the words, it's the mind :)
ReplyDeleteAnd oh yeah,
I,
leave sense force thought fail faith find shore
add note make chance tie down lose count
<3
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left speechless by the boundless frame of words...brilliant!
ReplyDeleteiggy: thankee pardner! :) [couldnt resist ;) ]
ReplyDeletediwakar: thank you :)
tris: the mind the mind. it thinks crazy thoughts and then jumps into a wine pool
thats what the mind does.
ok let me stop before i drive myself(and you) crazy
;)
<3 <3 to you!
hippie-girl: hehehe! thank you, you crazy girl :D you are wonderfully disconnected too ;)
<3
pulkit: thank you :)
all: "always, always nice to hear things like this.
a girl couldnt ask for more on a blue blue rainy monday"
<3
an abstract, complex, extended, beautiful haiku!! love it
ReplyDeletequicksilver: love all the words you use :) thank you!
ReplyDeleteamazing pairing and play. my favorite part was "sew hope".
ReplyDeletenandy: thank you )
ReplyDeleteI think that was my favorite part too...
beautifully penned down!!
ReplyDeleteMagical! Silky! Wonders!
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