Sunday, September 27, 2009

blue dusk


though i know 

you'd want to,
steal the colour of the skies;

i would still,
frankly so,
gladly keep my Indigo.


12 comments:

  1. It would make more sense to me if it was a return ticket by Indigo air. Hehe, just kidding :) Will think about this under the Goan skies!

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  2. Lets then together make the rainbow :)

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  3. hmmm
    i would keep my azure.

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  4. Anonymous9:59 PM

    I absolutely adore your shorter pieces... They're so clever, if not profound.

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  5. pretty, meghana, very pretty :)

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  6. really really beautiful :)

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  7. how do you do it. every single time.

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  8. @tris
    please dont! Goa deserves doing better things ;)

    @diwakar
    no, no rainbow, its flimsy and garish
    i like just the indigo, dark and powerful, thank you very much

    @krow
    azure is light, it floats

    @unsung
    well thank you :) but you know how my poetry works ;)

    @meandering mind
    not ok!
    perseverance is the key

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  9. @mentalie
    thank you, its very pretty in my mind too, complete monochrome
    ;)

    @quicksilver
    :) indigo IS a beautiful colour, but terribly underrated like the crow

    @atom spy
    well, i, mmm, thank you :)

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  10. Anonymous8:01 PM

    @Meghna
    In subtle, yet beautiful ways... Tingles the mind and the wit, at the same time.

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  11. @unsung
    sweet boi you :)

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